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this song could use some stereo work:
- the drums could use some stereo imaging (give each "drum" its own panning).
- the instruments themselves sound fairly mono. I haven't figured out how to make a mono sound wider, but by doing that, you could get a ZUN-style sausage waveform.

you might also make the drums a little quieter and everything else a little louder, but that might happened anyway if you do some stereo stuff.

SeleDreams responds:

Thanks for the advices, ngl I myself would like to make my songs more stereo, but it's a bit hard to make it "balanced" when playing with panning

I'm soon going to get an SD-80 which would allow me to have access to more accurate touhou 6-like instruments, as for this song I used the Soundcanvas VA vst which is an equivalent to the SC-88 pro while good it doesn't have all the instruments used by zun (who uses the sd-90, which is the same as the sd-80 just with another form factor)

Haha -- The part neat the beginning with the really twangy string instrument and the trumpets sounds a lot like a Super Mario Galaxy (1/2) boss fight.

buy a recorder and play it yourself and ill give you some stars

This isn't a criticism of the song, but its what I was thinking about while listening:
Video Game? I'm not sure what kind of video games you play but this doesn't give me BGM vibes at all. Too much sidechaining for that I think. To be fair, Newgrounds doesn't have very good options, but I think house or techno would be better.
The song itself is good though.

I know the drums are supposed to be loud, this is drum n bass, but I do feel like it would be a little better if you turned them down only a couple dB. I find that I want to hear what the other sounds are doing, but the song says "No - hear the drums!"
Other than that, its good.

I'm sure this is because its a synthesized instrument but the electric guitar is lacking energy. The drums, especially the snare, sound pretty weak too. And the piano makes an OK lead, but it need some processing to make it pop more. Overall, its a good idea but the execution wasn't great.

It used to be the case that almost every song here that tried to copy ZUN's sound did so really badly, but lately its been spot on. This sounds like a proper Touhou song, and it is definitely full of energy.

Darksynth, Horrorsynth, and Cyberpunk Musician. I mostly do Touhou arranges.
I'm also open for collabs/commissions.

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